Kayla, Great job on these! I really like what you did with the lighting. Here are my recommendations from top to bottom: First one: I like how you burnt the edges, but for this image, I think a circular burn would have worked better (ask me how to do this since I haven't shown you yet). Otherwise it looks kind of choppy.
Second: I would have moved the camera to the left. Notice the straight stock on the corn. You could have lined that up on the right edge of the frame, but I don't know what would've been on the left.
Third: Maybe a vertical composition is would work.
Kayla,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on these! I really like what you did with the lighting. Here are my recommendations from top to bottom:
First one: I like how you burnt the edges, but for this image, I think a circular burn would have worked better (ask me how to do this since I haven't shown you yet). Otherwise it looks kind of choppy.
Second: I would have moved the camera to the left. Notice the straight stock on the corn. You could have lined that up on the right edge of the frame, but I don't know what would've been on the left.
Third: Maybe a vertical composition is would work.